Monday 3 August 2020

Animal farm




Animal farm


In class we made animal masks for a book we are reading. This book is called Animal farm by George Orwell.

The class has made these mask for a play we are going to do.Here is what I got from the story.


“ Animal farm is about the animals not being happy on the farm so they decide to fight back and take over the farm from Mr Jones, it seem to be going okay but then the pigs take over for good"


I am a dog and I don’t have a name and my friend Taylor is a donkey called Benjamin.


Monday 9 March 2020

Monday 2 September 2019

The bully


Eilish writer's profile

The Author


Hello  My name is Eilish I am 9 years old.
My school is called  Hokitika Primary School.    
I  live in New Zealand  and my town is Hokitika.


I love reading and  making new friends.  
When I grow  up I want to own a cake shop with all different types of cake from chocolate to vanilla. 
My favourite author is Jacqueline Wilson and I like to read books set in World War II.
I love  to write Realistic fiction.


Writer Workshop helped me by showing me to look at my writing and to revise it.

I have learned that I can do a good piece of writing but I need to stop thinking that I can’t and think I can.

The bully

Once there lived a doll. This doll was named Annabelle. She had brown hair, a blue dress, and white shoes. One day Annabelle was in her box on the shelf in a big, big store. She was waiting to get bought. Then all of a sudden her box started to move. She did not know what was happening then she thought perhaps she would be going to a new home.

 On the way to her new home, she could not see what was happening because she got put into a bag. Then her bag started to move. She saw a little hand dig down and pick up her box and pulled it up. Annabelle saw a little girl and she was happy. The little girl opened up the box and pulled Annabelle up into her arms. When she got to her new home the little girl carried Annabelle in. When Annabelle saw her new home, she felt like the luckiest toy in all the world.

 She wanted to go in and say hi to all the toys. When they went in Annabelle so badly wanted to go and see where she would be staying. When it was time to go and see the toy room she thought, ‘what if the other toys don’t like me ́? But it was too late. Annabelle went into the room; she was so so happy. The other toys were so excited to see her too. But there was one toy that did not like her. This toy had a box for a head and lego arms and blocks for feet.

 Annabelle wanted to say hi but he did not. It was Annabelle's first night in her new home. While she was asleep the mean toy got a vivid and started to draw on Annabelle’s face. The next morning all the toy’s saw Annabelle’s face. They did not know what to say. When the little girl got up she screamed she called for her mum and dad. Annabelle didn’t know what was happening.

 The toy’s told Annabelle what box head had done to her face she started to cry. The next day the other toys came up with a plan; that they shared it with Annabelle. She agreed so they set it up. When they had finished they waited and waited. The mean toy walked straight into their trap.

 Annabelle liked the trap. It was made up of a rope and when box head stepped into it he flew right upside in mid-air then he stepped into it went BOOM. ’’What are you doing?’’ the mean toy yelled. The police toy said,” you know what you have done so you’re going away for a long long time”.Then the other toy’s had a big party to celebrate and they lived in peace.

Monday 5 August 2019

Thursday 27 September 2018

Who AM I?

We have been reading stories  then doing some fun activities  this is one of my favourites  here is my  who am I? 

Who am I?
  • The first letter in my name is n
  • I am orange, white and a little black on me
  • I love swimming
  • I have a friend that is blue and black
  • I am a he
  • My friend is a she
  • I have a dad that looks like me
  • My friend is a forgetful fish

Can you guess who I am?
do not go down the page until you have guessed.
















   

I am Nemo, and my friend is Dory.